Beyond The Veil Of the Mist

Some crap poem I tried

Please read the previous post that should be better for I poured every bit of what I feel into that poem titled Somewhere Somehow.


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Meaningless Existence
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On this lone winter night,
I feel your thoughts keep me warm,
Of gentle breeze in this unfriendly cold place
Of winter’s wind and it’s cold embrace

To touch every pore on my body,
To make me understand how I miss,
All that is now amiss
My life, my love and my past.

Somewhere distant you exist,
In your love’s arms keeping you warm
I exist knowing and feel the absence of you that brings pain
For maybe God forgot me somewhere down the line

I usher the lonely trees in the woods tonight,
My last night before I undertake a journey
To a land far away where I can watch over you
Forever, to catch you smile, smile with love

The gun in my hand gleams ,
Reflects the silver moon in its chrome,
I shall soon put this soul less existence to rest
My body, for it is tired existing

Living without you is a choice I had to make,
You made the choice and I acknowledged it,
I just wish to hear you once before I leave,
Before the lead bathes in my blood.

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Please give me a feed back on this if possible. Critisicm welcome

posted by Abinomable Non Nutcase @ 3:19 AM